It startes with crimenal calling his enemy and sayin "i have got some thing that's your's " then he finds out that one of his bodygaud's has been kidnapped then the guy on the phone askes for 1 million pound
if he want's his bodyguard. Then it goes back in flash back's in how did it start and why did he kidnapp
his bodyguard ?
It all started when they were littel kids and they had a fight after one of them started spreading stuff that they are not true so 7 years later he find's out were he lives and every littel thing about him. So he kidnappes his bodyguard with one of his friend.
He get's him to a place there was no people and then he call's him and tell's him "i have something that is your's" so he said "do i know you ?" the kidnapper say's "remember 7 years ago the guy who you spread roomers about and you had a fight with him" he said "yh ?" the kidnapper said "well his the one that has got your bodyguard" then the conversation goes then the kidnapper ask's for 1 million pounds
if he want's his bodyguard then the guy comes with the money and his bodyguard's so he gives him the money then the kidnapper shoot's at his enemy and then he die's and the bodyguard's shoot at the kidnaper till he was died.
Well done Sami, you have listened to my verbal feedback!
ReplyDeleteYou have produced a good starting point here, with the beginning of your characters and a basic storyline.
Your next steps are to develop your characters and to break your work down into individual scenes. What are the characters called and what do they look like? What are the locations for each scene and what exactly happens in each scene?
Well done, good start!