EXT.TOWN.DAY
jhon steel's a phone from the shop then the security see's him on the cctv and let's the police know
ext.town.day
he run's away so the police spotted him and chanced him out of town
ext.hillfields.day
he get's arrested in hill field the officers take him to the police station to investigate what happend .
This is a good start Sami. As you change location, remember to create a new scene, for instance when the officers take Jhon to the police station. Is there a scene in the police car, for instance?
ReplyDeleteKeep it up, much better.