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sami and mohammed chase zeshan between ally way and free running between building
for 2 minutes
then the zeshan slips and they catch up with him and bet him down to the floor and take him to decon who asked them to bring him.
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They hand him to decon (boss) and there boss gives them a order to through him in a dark room tell his gang leader pay's us £50,000.
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The kidnapper call's his gang leader and tell's him that i got one of your mans here so if u wont him you better drop the money to me in 24 hours other ways it's too late am gana kill your gang memeber.
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The other gang leader send's his mans to shoot the kidnapper and his bodyguards and get the there gang member back without paying.
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The gang come to the kidnapper and start to shoot his bodyguards to get through to the boss and shoot him and save the hostage.
More detail, it is coming along Sami! You need to work on character descriptions and dialogue now.
ReplyDeleteThink about what your characters look like and are wearing in each scene, and what they will say in your scripts.
Keep going, you are making real progress.